Touch

[Amy R Wethington]

Oh wow! Nice twist ending. :) Well done! And well written.

[Ron Wetherington]

Thanks, Amy! Glad to know we're4 cousins--of some sort!

[Keith and Elisabeth Raymond]

Great story Ron. Has a nice patina. An acuity mixed with a bit of froth. Spicey... I guess I should say touching.

[Ron Wetherington]

Those are nice comments, indeed! I like spicey when subtle--glad you saw it!